comments on 3 peers =)

After all the presentations in class.

i shall first make a comment on nadia's design. i especially like the way nadia presented her designs as it really brings out her unique style of drawing. On the overall, nadia's design has clearly shown her loves and her hates clearly, and thus design is very nicely integrated, her choice of colour was also suitable for the two themes. for the love, nadia's love is playgrounds and her design has brought out her loves for playground very well by using smiley faces. The colours used are bright and vibrant, therefore also bringing out the happiness and her loves. As for her hates, i feel that the usage of colours can be further improved. The clarity of the message too. =)

next, for yiting's design, i will suggest she change the colour of the insecticdie so as to match the rest of the colour scheme. Also, for the hate theme, the clarity of the name can be further improved. On the overall, i felt that yiting's design has included many details. =)

lastly, for poh's design, for the loves theme, i will suggest that the letters of her name, make out using shoelaces, be shown more distinctly. the spaces between each letter can be more in order to separate each letter. For the hate theme, i will suggest that the letter P's design to be made more integrated into the design. Overall, i felt that the usage of colour was nice. =)